April 9, 2014 by Narmadhaa

Life goes on… as it never ends

Living. No Life

The city was crowded. There was the hum of people, walking dead. Joy was long gone. Now there’s only survival. And money.
She was at work. Watching the outside world, burning with greed. An airplane took off from the airport nearby. People walked by. Nothing changed.
People lived. No life.

This fifty word post is for the “Weekly Writing Challenge: Fifty“.

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artfullyadelie April 10, 2014 at 1:03 am

This story is very deep and poetic. The first time I read it, I had a sense that this was a future society. Though, reading it again, I realized I’ve looked at life this way before. The last line was especially powerful. Well done!

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1. snarmadhaa April 10, 2014 at 10:22 am
  
  Thanks for visiting. Glad you liked it. 🙂
  
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viewsplash April 10, 2014 at 12:44 pm

Well said! No life is what we have! 😦

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1. snarmadhaa April 10, 2014 at 1:08 pm
  
  We have no life, yes. But at least we can still change that. Thank so much Samir, for dropping by. Appreciate it. 🙂
  
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