“As quoted above, the directors of the board, in a unanimous decision, have agreed to terminate the alleged accusations placed on it by the self-proclaimed advocates of rights. It is hereby declared that any individual or group, with our without legal advice, can no longer seek or demand the permission of the board or any other decision-level authority for additional time off of premises for purposes including, by not limited to, spring breaks or bearing offsprings.”
Huh?
“Sorry miss,” Julia’s supervisor sighed before raising his voice over the din of machines and hum of laboured men, “No maternity leave here.”
The only niggle I can find in this, is that you used ‘has’ instead of ‘have’ when referring to the directors’ decision. Wonderful little story otherwise.
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Ouch. Was working with “the directors’ board […] has” and forgot to change it to “have”. Thanks for the catch. Corrected it now.
And thanks so much for reading and appreciating.
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Great job! Don’t worry about the typo. Please check my writing 🙂 I need feedback from good writers like you. It’s very short : https://thebiligualwriter.com.
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