Just One

N Flash Fiction, NaBloPoMo, Unplugged November 22, 2014November 22, 2014 1 Minute

No one was around to see him so what did it matter if he took just one? – Today’s Author

Crouching low, he picked a single blossom.
Clara loved flowers next to her hospital bed.

Another prompt from Today’s Author. National Blog Posting Month – #Day22

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Published November 22, 2014November 22, 2014

Rob Diaz says:

November 26, 2014 at 7:49 pm

Popping over from the link you left at Today’s Author. I’m always amazed when two short sentences can tell an entire story like this. The image definitely helps as well. I feel a bit of peace along with a bit of sadness within the story — peace that he can provide some sort of comfort to her but sadness that she’s stuck in a hospital bed.

Good job with the prompt and thanks for sharing it at Today’s Author!

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1. snarmadhaa says:
  
  November 27, 2014 at 6:46 am
  
  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Rob.
  Have a great day. Cheers!
  
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